i like how it says freshly grilled on the pretzel.
the second one is really cool i think, but it needs to be more readable
You seem like you have a lot of the same thing. Try mixing it up. And i wouldnt use both slogans in one advertisement. it could confuse the reader.
they are good other then the 2nd one she be a little more readable.i would also make the "not just good but freakin' good" bigger cause it is too small to read at a glance
the one that says freshly grilled is good
i think some of them can be more readable
try making the pretzel outline cleaner
some aren't really readable but i like the last one...it kind of combines all ideas.
Goodjob, you have a lot though.
I like the concept and the pretzels with the steam.
The simpler the better. I think the pretzels should be darker though.
good ideas. creative
creative, but it's not very readable.
The second one is fairly hard to read out and most of them look alike.
These are really good and as you go down they get a lot better and the idea gets across it just needs to be a little neater.
There is to much going on you need to make it short and to the point.
Theses are all good but make it readable other than that your good
They all nice really creative
maybe make the pretzel look more "finished" and also more compact.
try to make it more clear and neat
i like how it says freshly grilled on the pretzel.
ReplyDeletethe second one is really cool i think, but it needs to be more readable
ReplyDeleteYou seem like you have a lot of the same thing. Try mixing it up. And i wouldnt use both slogans in one advertisement. it could confuse the reader.
ReplyDeletethey are good other then the 2nd one she be a little more readable.i would also make the "not just good but freakin' good" bigger cause it is too small to read at a glance
ReplyDeletethe one that says freshly grilled is good
ReplyDeletei think some of them can be more readable
ReplyDeletetry making the pretzel outline cleaner
ReplyDeletesome aren't really readable but i like the last one...it kind of combines all ideas.
ReplyDeleteGoodjob, you have a lot though.
ReplyDeleteI like the concept and the pretzels with the steam.
ReplyDeleteThe simpler the better. I think the pretzels should be darker though.
ReplyDeletegood ideas. creative
ReplyDeletecreative, but it's not very readable.
ReplyDeleteThe second one is fairly hard to read out and most of them look alike.
ReplyDeleteThese are really good and as you go down they get a lot better and the idea gets across it just needs to be a little neater.
ReplyDeleteThere is to much going on you need to make it short and to the point.
ReplyDeleteTheses are all good but make it readable other than that your good
ReplyDeleteThey all nice really creative
ReplyDeletemaybe make the pretzel look more "finished" and also more compact.
ReplyDeletetry to make it more clear and neat
ReplyDelete